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Before you type your assignment, insert at least one of the above items with Green X and while you type and revise your paper below, attempt to include it. After you have typed your assignment go back and insert a red X on the table next to all the tools you have used. Examples have been inserted. Do attempt to use as many tools as you can. Do not attempt to impress me with images/fonts/colors. I am interested only in you using the tools above and writing coherently. Save the Razzle Dazzle for your other pages.
Write all paragraphs in Times new Roman 12 point font
Animals, and zombies
By:Misa
Animals and zombies are unlike in someways. Because animals eat insects, and food, but zombies eat brains. Also, they are alike because they both have feet, they both die, they both have eyes, mouth, and ears. Most people think that zombies are uglier, and animals are cuter also that was another information that both about their differences. When I look at zombies I think "blehhh" , but when I see animals I think "awww...". That's some information about both of their alikes, and unlikes.
Hints:
- Put away all worn out words!
- Use spellcheck!
- Own your words first! Then use them appropriately!
- Use your glow and grow comments below. Remember, it is your piece!
- Brainstorm first! Everytime!
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| I like it that you put "animals are cuter than zombies" |
The "that" of the last sentence should be "that's" or "that is" because it makes more sense. Summer |
| I like that how you said that they are unlike in some ways. -Bien |
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| That was a good compare and contrast.abbi |
You need to put a ' in between ill.abbi |
| I like how you said awww about animals.evan |
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| I like your topic.Juan |
All animas dont eat food only a little.Juan |
| I like how you describe zombie and animals. Sean |
You don't have to put a comma after animals. Sean |
| Your right animals are cuter then zombies.-kayla1 |
I don't think that zombies die cause thier already dead do they?-kayla1 |
| I like youre title.abbi |
I don't the thats how you spell cuter is it?abbi |
| I liked how it organized.-Tatianna(: |
I think you should add more to your story.-Tatianna(: |
| I like when you said when I look at zombies I think "Bleh".-makena |
The first sentance doesnt make sence It should be animals and zombies are not alike in some ways.-makena |
| I like how you put qoute in your story.-Giselle |
You can't start a sentence with because.-:3Giselle |
| i like your story @_@ jaliyah. |
You cant start a sentence with because @_@ jaliyah . |
| I liek it when you said, but zombies eat brains |
I dont think your soposed to color your title.-Makena |
| I like your title.Cameron |
you should put on the first sentence is animals and zombies are alike and unlike in someways. Cameron |
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