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9/23/11 Steve

We were on a field trip to the Coca Cola factory in Atlanta back in 2050, when this guy walked in with a bunch of flowers for our 4th grade teacher, Ms. Samuels.  We didn't know what to think.   Then another guy walked in with a bunny.  Miss Samuels looked at us and I think she was starting to cry, but the tourguide came up and said, "Children, it's time to begin the tour.  We will be visiting the Coke Factory of the future.  Put these glasses on and whatever you do, don't open any doors that are pink, black or blue!  I wish to this day we had listened better.

10/16/11 Levi

When the tour started it was very fun but we were supposed to stay there for the whole day and the class started to get bored. So my friends and I left the class to find some fun of our own. We stopped at a blue door and I remembered what the tour guide said and I said ''Uh guys, we're not supposed to go in there''

''Are you saying you're chicken?'' Mike said

''No. I'm saying were not supposed to go in there''

''Bak Bak Bak, chicken''he said

''Alright fine I'll go in there with you but if we get in trouble it's your fault'' I said.

''Okay let's go'' Zach said. While we were inside the class had just realized we were gone.

 ''Where did they go? They could be in serious danger'' our teacher said

''I could help you find them'' the tour guide said ''This facility has installed a tracker for just the occasion'' 

''Okay take us there'' she said. You could tell she was scared but she would never admit it to anyone. When they arrived at the where the tracker was the tour guide went pressed a few buttons and pulled  a couple of levers then said ''Oh no'' ''What is it?'' the teacher said

''Something bad, very bad'' he said.

''What?!''

"Those kids of yours just entered a blue door."   

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