Drawing a Yak!
If you start to lack,
On anything, oh no a painful whack!
You hide behind a crate,
Or behind a gate.
You carefully look out and, the start to unpack,
Because your fully under attack!
You decide to hide behind a crate,
Sitting soldier straight.
All of a sudden, what the yak!
The yak is a threat, and part of the attack!
When you unpacked your skates, you skate,
Make sure you go straight!
Because when you draw a yak,
Don’t let it be on the attack.
By: Lisa
Comments (2)
Celine said
at 1:14 pm on Mar 9, 2010
nice poem, lisa! it is sooo rhymey!!!! :)
Lizzie said
at 1:38 pm on Apr 21, 2010
I love this poem, ITS SOOOOO GREATTT!!!!!:D :D I like how everything is so rhymey!!! After you say you When you unpaked your skates, you to a running start and skated.Buttttttt, ITS STILL A WONDERFUL TERRIFIC STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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